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Pyros
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 9:50 am     Reply with quote
original character by feng

used my right hand and a mouse ;)



some comments would be nice... :)

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 9:51 am     Reply with quote
[what i said before]



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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 3:43 pm     Reply with quote
[what faustgfx said before]
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 4:51 pm     Reply with quote
[This message has been flamed by Everyone on 2/20/01]
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 12:02 am     Reply with quote
i'm sure you used your right hand, given this kind of sketch

anyway, i think this lacks *PUNCH*

this isn't anything that grabs me by the balls, spins me around a few times and mops up the floor afterwards... it's a bit dull. you know, you could have made some more interesting variations in the colors of her clothing (or made it more metallic).. you should have used more variation on skin tones, nobody has the same tone all over their body. The general breast area is the lightest place, and the skin gets more reddish and darker the more you get to the hands and feet (that's just a general rule, learn it and THEN break it, in an interesting way please ).

Black, silver, skin. These colors DO work, if you have enough variation with blue and red speckles, but a white background? I think you should meditate about that some more.

also, a little reminder of the author of the sketch *within* the pic would be nice (especially since feng frequently seems to be the object of such attacks )

anyway, i hope i was of some help, now go and make me rich!!
RICH!!




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PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 12:27 am     Reply with quote
What faust said before
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Pyros
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 12:39 am     Reply with quote
added credits within the image.

> that's just a general rule (...)

sorry, but i don't have any drawing/painting
background... don't know artsy rules and
all these other stuff, just tried to do my
best ;)

i'll keep your words in mind... the next one
will be better... but dunno if you'll be
rich at all ;)

[This message has been edited by Pyros (edited February 20, 2001).]
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 3:06 am     Reply with quote
Akolyte: nono we are not evil flamers :>
I really told pyros before.

[edit: i am a dumbass and can't type.. I am a dumbass and can't..]

[This message has been edited by Nex (edited February 21, 2001).]
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 3:13 am     Reply with quote
i didn't flame it. much. if i recall right.

pyroswhee has potential. we just gotta get him away of deviantart hugging photo raping.



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PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 6:49 am     Reply with quote
16:45 <@^pyros^> "pyroswhee has potential. we just gotta get him away of deviantart hugging photo raping"
16:45 <@^pyros^> *giggle of doom*


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