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Kolt junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 42
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 9:09 pm |
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I'm trying to get a cool feel to a basic line/inky type thing like *place name here* that drew shugenja. Crits are welcome but there's not much to crit. The clothes are messed up bad, but I had fun with this quikie! ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/wink.gif) |
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mantis member
Member # Joined: 03 Jun 2000 Posts: 359 Location: NJ/USA
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 4:11 am |
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No offense, it's a good start but it doesn't even belong here. When people spend hours upon hours finishing their piece and finally post it here many a time they get no response because stuff like your's moves it down. I am not judging it, I only mean to say that it's a good start but seriously, what "critique" did you expect?
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topeira member
Member # Joined: 07 Feb 2001 Posts: 553 Location: Holon, Israel
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 10:53 pm |
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mantis is quit right - this belongs to "work in progress".
besides that the flow is not bad. i think water color (real or digital) would fit it the most. just like in other japanese drawings.
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