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Author   Topic : "Colored line art - Buzz Lightyear from Toy Story"
scarknee
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 2:38 pm     Reply with quote
Hi,

This is only my second post, still learning but thought I'd see if anybody has any crits on this.

Here is the line art:


Here is my colored version:


-Scarknee
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Akolyte
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 8:35 pm     Reply with quote
Thats a very clean and crisp render, good...but, try working on lighting, there aren't any contrasting darker/lighter areas that make this type of thing look like it has depth.
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mantis
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 4:48 am     Reply with quote
The pic is good but needs some work. I don't know how to express this but basically it needs to be more 'shinier'. Apply more color dodge, and more depth and shadows.
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Evon
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 11:49 am     Reply with quote
very good line work. ^_~) Myabe should try to have more tonings/shadings to show the depth of buzzlightyear. ^_^ would be nice if have background too. Keep it up! It's great!

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