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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 2:03 pm |
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Here's another one... Enjoy... Just over an hour in Photoshop...
Any suggestions? And yes, she does have large hands. ;P~
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Nex member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 2:25 pm |
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her hips look a bit too long and broad and
her collarbones look a bit odd- other than that it looks quite crisp and visigoth style. |
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 4:36 pm |
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Eh...All my women have large birthing hips. ;P~
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AlieN junior member
Member # Joined: 28 Sep 2000 Posts: 40 Location: Vancouver, B.C., Canada
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 5:47 pm |
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I think the reason her hips look so odd is because the bulge of her hips is at about the height where one would normally find the middle of the thighs
i agree with the neck comment.. her neck is too wiry, since she's not that skinny.
i like the reflections in the hair and the clothing though |
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Ian member
Member # Joined: 19 Mar 2000 Posts: 1339 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 9:07 pm |
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Really quite beautiful, mate! However the hips do bother me a bit...they do look a wee bit too wide. And the hand she has across her tummy looks a bit strange. Other than those two things it looks fabulous!
ian
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The Incredible MGC member
Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2001 Posts: 64 Location: San Diego, CA
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 4:09 pm |
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ARGH-- I wrote a bunch of anatomy suggestions here but I just snipped them because after looking over the rest of your work, I don't think your anatomy problems here are a common theme in the rest of your work.
Just basically the hands here look a bit off, like they were done without reference (hands are TOUGH!!!) and then the hip/thigh issue.
But this drawing is cool and you have a cool style all around...
PS> LAY OFF THE RAMEN!!!! The SODIUM CONTENT in RAMEN will kill you man! =) Remember, it says like 38% sodium on the back, but it considers one package to be like 4 servings! So one bag'o ramen = 136% of your daily sodium intake.
- The Art of Matthew G. Cox and yes I am aware that my own drawings often have awful anatomy!
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Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 639 Location: Columbus, Ohio
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 7:56 am |
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yeah, the prob with the hips is not that they are too wide, it's that they are too "tall". it's ok to have wider hips, not every chick is a supermodel
i love your style. do you use paths a lot, and if so, do you ever use illustrator?
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 9:16 am |
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SporQ;
I don't use paths at all. Every one of my pieces is entirely freehand. If you'd like, I'll re-post the tutorial on how I do this stuff...hehe
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Member # Joined: 26 Dec 2000 Posts: 88 Location: Odense, Denmark
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 12:37 am |
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 12:46 am |
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Here ya go guys... hehe
http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/003731.html
That's in the archive, but all the tutorial gfx are still there. Thanks for the comments, everyone.
To answer the questions/statements; Yeah, I didn't use any reference, and just tried to whip it up as quick as possible...I'm quite pleased with the face, but again, the hands/hips need some work. ;P
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