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TheNexx · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:07 pm

No coments.. Its just a 20min pic, but critique is very welcome.

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Dennis Sedov

Bishop_Six · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:26 pm

Cool... Blade Runner is one of my favorite movies.

topeira · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:45 pm

very moody. good. just make the man taller. his pelvis should be above the table hight. table hight is around 3.4 feet high. 75 santimeters.

very good mood.
i was looking for a white peagon somewhere...

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Totuus · Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 2:53 am

Actually, i don't have anything to critique, what is new for me.. Thought i like the smoke and the reflection on the table..
I don't know why i'm even writing this, cause you expressly said.. No comments..
... Hey wait a sec.. i found something to critique..
The perspective point of the table goes to the canter of the picture, what is ok, but why does the left and the right side of the window have different angles..

You should add more sense of motion to the fan..
Anyway, it's good pic.

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Just when things turn to acceptable, you open your eyes..

Gecko · Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 7:20 am

No! Don't touch the fan!

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Francis · Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 11:02 am

Totuus, I think the window edges appear "incorrect" because the window is actually in a wall that is slanted towards the viewer - if I remember correctly this room is inside one of the giant pyramid buildings.

Nice image, too!

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Jason · Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 11:05 am

if you touch the fan jsut make sure its not on.

Switch · Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 5:05 pm

The colours and composition are just as I remember them. The fan should be casting beams of light and shadow throughout the room though, thats one of the things that made the scene so good.

Should there be one of the voidkompf thingo machines on the desk though?, that thing which tested the R.E.M of the simulants.

good 'quicky'

Lukias · Guest Member #

The middle fan blade......shouldn't it be level with the other two, it seems to be bent downwards.
Oh yeah, I dig the pic, very cool

Elijah · Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 6:10 pm

I think the shadow in the smoke looks good, but I think it should be more aparent. It might look more dramitic.

TheNexx · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 12:41 am

Thanks for your input, guys!!

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Dennis Sedov

biggunn01 · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 10:51 am

i like it. very emotional/moody. kinda mysterious. all the problems i see have been stated alredy so there is no need to repeat them. keep it up
wes

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Light · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 1:39 pm

I like the windows as they are. This could be due to the fact that there is a 3rd vanishing point or the walls arent straight or due to spherical distorotion.

It feels to me like looking out one of the robot eyes.

I like it as is.

TheNexx · Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 2:32 pm

I'l repeat once again

) This building is a pyramid.

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Dennis Sedov