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SplitSoul
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 10:46 pm     Reply with quote
This is forced up from the world of whispers,
where the terror and negation are out on an endless prowl.
I'm just attempting to summon the memory of pre-epidemic existence,
while nursing bruised ideals which combat human shortcomings.

We are transitional creatures who destroy ourselves in slow motion.
In our terror and ignorance we do the very things which aggravate
the calamity and increase the death rate.

Each fate is no more than a refrain fluttering around a few blood stains.
The interval seperating you from your corpse is a small sticky wound,
and nothing can keep you from bleeding...
Ideas themselves turn red and encroach upon each other like tumors
in a philosophical stupor.

We are merely puppets, stuffed with red junk... the blood's inferno drowns out the soul.

Life is that which decomposes at every moment with every movement.

Heretics of existence, we are banished to the community of the living,
whose sole virtue is to wait, gasping, for something
which is not
death.




-Split
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 11:57 pm     Reply with quote
Up we go.

-Split
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Darrin
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:45 am     Reply with quote
nice as always Split. Puts me in mind of a rather zen experience I had recently...

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I smile every day and I die every night.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 8:04 am     Reply with quote
Ack! The voices...the voices.....I need a young priest and an old priest...stop the insanity!...[i]the power of Christ compels YOU!...

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SplitSoul
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 6:04 pm     Reply with quote
"I am the Zen master."



-Split
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Kolt
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 6:37 pm     Reply with quote
This doesn't remind me of Ch'en (Zen), but it does have some relationships . This just sounds like suicide peotry, nice pic!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 8:20 pm     Reply with quote
:P

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Keto
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 7:43 am     Reply with quote
i really like the poem. great feel of human scum and apocalyptic comings. but your photomanip does not look as good as some of your previous ones.

i really liked wrath and i still have it for my wallpaper, liberty(i think it was called) was pretty good to. this one looks to simple and i am not recieving a mood from it like the others one cast.

i dont know this is just what i think ... and what do i know.
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SplitSoul
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 8:26 am     Reply with quote
"Wrath" was shite. End of story.


This isn't a wallpaper, it's just something I did while writing the poem... hmm...

Well, gotta get some sleep. Have fun.

-Split
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 15, 2001 1:23 pm     Reply with quote
AAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh, ok! LOL.
Not even a hint?... jus kiddin dude
The more i look at it, the more it grows on me.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 12:55 am     Reply with quote
Hey split! I never said this before but i like your poem, very cool. I think the image is good, but you could do better! I still think maybe some colour couldn't hurt it.
God you must hate me!
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 12:59 am     Reply with quote
NO COLOURS!!!111()#"/(#)"&#"(/"&%%#&%#/"

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