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SplitSoul member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 336 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 10:46 pm |
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This is forced up from the world of whispers,
where the terror and negation are out on an endless prowl.
I'm just attempting to summon the memory of pre-epidemic existence,
while nursing bruised ideals which combat human shortcomings.
We are transitional creatures who destroy ourselves in slow motion.
In our terror and ignorance we do the very things which aggravate
the calamity and increase the death rate.
Each fate is no more than a refrain fluttering around a few blood stains.
The interval seperating you from your corpse is a small sticky wound,
and nothing can keep you from bleeding...
Ideas themselves turn red and encroach upon each other like tumors
in a philosophical stupor.
We are merely puppets, stuffed with red junk... the blood's inferno drowns out the soul.
Life is that which decomposes at every moment with every movement.
Heretics of existence, we are banished to the community of the living,
whose sole virtue is to wait, gasping, for something
which is not
death.
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SplitSoul member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 336 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 11:57 pm |
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Up we go.
-Split |
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Darrin junior member
Member # Joined: 21 Jan 2001 Posts: 28 Location: Mill Creek, Washington, US
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:45 am |
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nice as always Split. Puts me in mind of a rather zen experience I had recently...
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I smile every day and I die every night. |
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Akolyte member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 722 Location: NY/RSAD
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 8:04 am |
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Ack! The voices...the voices.....I need a young priest and an old priest...stop the insanity!...[i]the power of Christ compels YOU!...
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SplitSoul member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 336 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 6:04 pm |
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"I am the Zen master."
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Kolt junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 42
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 6:37 pm |
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This doesn't remind me of Ch'en (Zen), but it does have some relationships . This just sounds like suicide peotry, nice pic! |
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SplitSoul member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 336 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 8:20 pm |
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:P
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Keto member
Member # Joined: 28 Jan 2001 Posts: 67 Location: Agoura, CA
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 7:43 am |
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i really like the poem. great feel of human scum and apocalyptic comings. but your photomanip does not look as good as some of your previous ones.
i really liked wrath and i still have it for my wallpaper, liberty(i think it was called) was pretty good to. this one looks to simple and i am not recieving a mood from it like the others one cast.
i dont know this is just what i think ... and what do i know. |
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SplitSoul member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 336 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 8:26 am |
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"Wrath" was shite. End of story.
This isn't a wallpaper, it's just something I did while writing the poem... hmm...
Well, gotta get some sleep. Have fun.
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neebhore member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 330 Location: UK
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2001 1:23 pm |
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AAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh, ok! LOL.
Not even a hint?... jus kiddin dude
The more i look at it, the more it grows on me. |
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neebhore member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 330 Location: UK
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 12:55 am |
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Hey split! I never said this before but i like your poem, very cool. I think the image is good, but you could do better! I still think maybe some colour couldn't hurt it.
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SplitSoul member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 336 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 12:59 am |
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NO COLOURS!!!111()#"/(#)""(/"&%%#&%#/"
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