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topeira
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 6:47 am     Reply with quote
i've been making stupid remarks on this forum for a week now and it's time to post something. it a bit IMBARESSING.... cuz i dont feel very talented next to others in this forum. u guys ROCK. so please let me know what can i do to make this one better.


this one was just an improvizasion. i didn't know where i was going when i started it so if it looks unplanned... it IS.

don't spare my feeling...

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 3:07 pm     Reply with quote
Hey this is pretty cool, a bit bland at the mo, needs more detail or richer colours/values and higher contrasts. The blue lighting adds nicely.
You may want to tone down the harsh white of the eye, it looks very cut'n'paste and perhaps add some more colours to area's eg the ear as its very two tone.

This is cool though
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Jason
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 3:54 pm     Reply with quote
I like the ear alot. the detail given to the inside of the ear looks great. If drawing it again I would have tried a three quarter view of the wolfs head and not just the profile. I think that alone will add alot more depth and expand your skills.
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