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topeira member
Member # Joined: 07 Feb 2001 Posts: 553 Location: Holon, Israel
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 6:47 am |
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i've been making stupid remarks on this forum for a week now and it's time to post something. it a bit IMBARESSING.... cuz i dont feel very talented next to others in this forum. u guys ROCK. so please let me know what can i do to make this one better.
this one was just an improvizasion. i didn't know where i was going when i started it so if it looks unplanned... it IS.
don't spare my feeling...
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[This message has been edited by topeira (edited February 12, 2001).] |
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Lukias Guest
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 3:07 pm |
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Hey this is pretty cool, a bit bland at the mo, needs more detail or richer colours/values and higher contrasts. The blue lighting adds nicely.
You may want to tone down the harsh white of the eye, it looks very cut'n'paste and perhaps add some more colours to area's eg the ear as its very two tone.
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Jason member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2001 Posts: 180 Location: Eugene Or
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 3:54 pm |
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I like the ear alot. the detail given to the inside of the ear looks great. If drawing it again I would have tried a three quarter view of the wolfs head and not just the profile. I think that alone will add alot more depth and expand your skills. |
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