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The Incredible MGC
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 Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 7:38 pm |
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This picture could make a good MISFITS poster.
See the area to the character's right? That big white space? The blatantness of that enormous white form and contrast created by the white against black pulls your eye to the upper left corner, away from the character.
You could fix that by making it a grey, or "shading" it evenly with very close together thin lines, evenly spaced. This would make that area appear more "grey", lessening the contrast in the upper left corner pulling your eye back to the character again.
it would make a great poster just like it is tho!
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topeira
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:21 pm |
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MGC is right. maybe more cracks on that wall.
i'd go for more details on the gun and more lines to the hair.
other than that it's excellent. like it. and let us see what u made so far with the half colored piece.
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Luke_de_Sade
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| Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 12:38 am |
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Ok, guys. Here's another pic I did, this one inked. Hope you like it. Also, I'm starting to learn how to color in my PC (with Paint Shop Pro 5.0) and well, I tried painting this pic but it was really difficult. I got so far as putting in all the flat colors...no shading, no lighting, no nothing. So if any of you guys could give it a go at this pic and paint it a bit, see how it comes out? Anyone?
Well, you can find the pic at www.geocities.com/lukexwf/alley.jpg |
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