[dalickwid]

comments and critique on pencils, colors, and inks please...i was tryin stuff out...lemme know if its better with or without backlighting



here's the inks: http://www.rpi.edu/~youngb/vasuki_birthday_ink.jpg
here's it without the backlighting: http://www.rpi.edu/~youngb/vasuki_birthday_small.jpg
http://www.rpi.edu/~youngb/vasuki_birthday_big.jpg (500K) http://www.rpi.edu/~youngb/vasuki_birthday_backlit_big.jpg (500K)

-Brandon

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[This message has been edited by dalickwid (edited February 12, 2001).]

[dalickwid]

no more large amount of bytes to download!...in case that was stopping people from commenting

-Brandon

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[Akolyte]

Your colors are too saturated, which tends to make it look fake. Your lighting is false, which also makes it look fake. Use softer brushes to even out your harsh areas of lighting and put some shadows in there. If you like using flat colors, then I would suggest choosing a dimmer palette, or one that corresponds well with your light source that you have created. Bright colors would not permeate the foreground of the warrior so much in this lighting scheme you have proposed.

[dalickwid]

holy shit...what did you just say?...what does saturated mean and where does the light permeate the foreground in the lighting scheme i proposed?...you talkin about the orange highlights on the character?...what makes the lighting false?...what does false lighting mean?...i was goin for an anime look in this pic...that's allz i know...

-Brandon

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