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Cede junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Feb 2001 Posts: 9 Location: Eppelheim,Germany
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 8:56 am |
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First of all i have to say that my english is not the best.I know this Forum for 1 week now and what i saw is just great.
now its time to post something myself.
It would be nice if you can tell if you like it or what i can do better.
Thanks
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synj member
Member # Joined: 02 Apr 2000 Posts: 1483 Location: San Diego
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 10:37 am |
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hi there.
Well, I think her facial features are a bit low, don't you think? If you moved the eyes, nose, mouth, up to the point where they were in correct relation to the ear bam its a ton better IMO. (the top of the ear should line up with the top of the eye)
YEEHA
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nightmare member
Member # Joined: 04 Aug 2000 Posts: 269 Location: calgary, alberta, canada
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 11:58 am |
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a few things to fix: the part above her eyes is very large. she has quite a forehead. as synj said, this can be fixed by putting her eyes higher up so the top of the eye lines up with the top of her ear. her ear and lips need a bit of tweaking too.
i like the hair and the glistening lips the eyes are great too. yay!
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root88 member
Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 194 Location: Wilmington, DE USA
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 6:18 pm |
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The angles of her eyes are a little funny. It looks like her head is a 3/4 view but her eyes are almost at front view. Some more detail in the eye lids and eye lashes might look good too. |
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Akolyte member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 722 Location: NY/RSAD
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 7:10 pm |
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It's okay, but is she supposed to be making a "look at me, Im a retard" face? Her lips and eyes are misplaced and they look very corky. Almost like there is something wrong with her. Look at your face, then look at that painting, then do it again, you'll see. |
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Cede junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Feb 2001 Posts: 9 Location: Eppelheim,Germany
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:03 am |
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Thank you. You are righ.
I have fixed this Problem.
The ear is now about 40 pixels lower.
IMO its much better then befor. W
What do you think ?
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Cede junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Feb 2001 Posts: 9 Location: Eppelheim,Germany
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:13 am |
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I have fixed it once again after i have read nightmares post.now the hair and the ears are lower. I hope this fixed the forehead problem.
Thanks so far
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