[lostpapers]

Hi

Sorry for re-submitting but the theme name was not good!

I'm new to this board and I wanted to submit, for my first message, a picture I've done recently.



Don't hesitate to tell me what you think!

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[This message has been edited by lostpapers (edited February 14, 2001).]

[Hurri-cane]

nice !


but i noticed one thing, should she be falling backwards ?


.caneman

[lostpapers]

In fact, I should have added some shadows to give some references. The position of the right leg should enable her to keep steady, without falling backward!

Ok, ok I admit it, the position is a bit akward but it is possible to remain standing with this position

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[Enayla]

'tis a very cool picture!

Glad to see you found your way over here.

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[lostpapers]

Hi Enayla!

a pleasure to meet you here! Thanks Somk for showing me this marvelus forum site !



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[Dan]

it's hard to tell where the feet are. To me it looks kinda like she'd fall back and to her left.

[swampbug]

Can I lay down behind her. If she falls I will catch her... I dont have any problems with that.


-swamp


BTW. she has a hot ASS.

[Awetopsy]

I like this... you've got a nice style lostpapers.

I dont see anything I would wnat to crit immediately except the fact that she does look a bit like shes tipping over...

-awe

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[Krazy]

nice i like but ya the right foot looks like it should be resting on a chair or rock or she was born with a stub leg.hehe oh and i really like the shiny butt great job...stil better than me

[lostpapers]

I agree now completely, she really seems to fall back. The fact is that her right foot is a little in the back and that most of her weight should be on this foot ( like 70 % of the weight ).

I'll try to add some ground and shadow to correct that!

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[Vesuvius]

quote:

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Originally posted by swampbug:
Can I lay down behind her. If she falls I will catch her... I dont have any problems with that.


-swamp


BTW. she has a hot ASS.

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I concur, the ass is indeed hot.

[lostpapers]

That's true, I've especally spent some time on her back fleshy part because it is some kind of focus point in the image, but I never thought that everyone would like it like that



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[Visigoth]

...Considering that with her right hand she's practicing way of the snake (part of Shao-Lin) her legs are in a completely wrong position. Her knees should be bent, back straight, and her feet should be just over one shoulder-width apart. Second mistake is with the nunchaku. She's holding it the wrong way. Third mistake is also with the nunchaku. If she's really practicing way of the snake, she wouldn't be holding one. Way of the snake is an un-armed combat technique. :P Other than that, I like your coloring.

~{V}~

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[Snake Grunger]

Papiers perdus !!

Ton image est chouette, mais la jambe qui s'�loigne de nous est zarb. Son avant-jambe gauche est �galement pas bien fait, c'est pas courbe un os ! C'est un bon exercise que de faire des poses avec des angles/perspectives compliqu�s, mais cela fait que c'est plus facile de se retrouver dans le champs lorsque vient le temps de finaliser l'image.

Tu devrais travailler sur ton �clairage et les formes g�n�rales. Un ombrage par-terre irait bien pour aider celui qui visionne l'image � situer le personnage dans un espace tri-dimensionnel.

Translation:
Super! Keep on at it.

[lostpapers]

Snake Grunger : You're completely right and I agree with your comments. The fact it that this picture was at first an exercice of style ( that I succeed I think regarding what I choose to do : hard to draw stance and high quality color ) and consequently has mistake for other points.

Anyway, I agree also that with some work ( shadow reference ) the picture should become better pleasing to the eye.


I really appreciate your comment


Visigoth - Wuahahaha! MArvelous, you're exactly the person I thought I would never meet. The fact is that I practice chan Chuan style and that I found amusing to draw a woman that take a stance but with mistakes ( right arm bent, bad feet position for a fu-bo, nunchaku not well taken ) and you can't imagine how it pleases me to read your comment. THAT'S GREAT . Someone has seen the flaws!!!!




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