[Seph|roth]

Hey guys and gals !

Well, even though i rarely draw or paint nowadays, im trying to get back my motivation.. I'm not very good at this, I know, but Im trying...

Here's the image



I did this mostly in Painter Classic, it was my first time trying it out and i had a really hard time, i then did a couple of touch ups in photoshop..

Im probably gonna use this in this months Dr*w Cl*b as well (shhh we cant mention it )
well, crits are welcome ! Be gentle

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- Seph -
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[Dryfire]

Nice man, i like how you did the hood's highlights. I would make the botton part of his jaw a bit darker though nice job!

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'Reality is just a dream'
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[Seph|roth]

For crying out loud...

This always happens, I put so much work into something and I get 0 or 1 reply only...

C'mon guys, it cant be THAT bad..
Gimme some replies, please !

crits or just comments..

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[Superbug]

Hey, its not really how good your drawing is to get replies. IT's who you are. Hell, look at all the girls on this forum, most of which can't draw for crap, and get 32 replies.

And dats the way it is.
Cool pic except ur anatomy is kinda off. Nose seems a bit too big, and the chin is like screwed. You need to work on the overall dramatic effect of the pic and add more body. Check my new pic I posted on here and give me a response too! :0

[Hightop]

it looks really good...
But i think his right pupil is too small....

check out my new post to....
"Time of medieval"



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Hightop

As i turn and look into the sun
the rays burn my eyes
happy happy happy
everybodys happy
now like a turtle the sun looks
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dbl design

[Frost]

It's a nice piece Seph, perhaps your best yet! Don't let the lack of replies get you down, but find motivation to improve yourself... as you can see right now, you are really beginning to understand more than you did previously, keep at it! You know where to reach me... =)

[Joachim]

I agree with everything frost said. It's not that bad at all, so don't let lack of replies let you down - some threads has an easier chance to be ignored, if there's nothing about the motif that provokes to a discussion or something ?

comments about the face. You might have gotten in to far with detailing before you've decided how the light should be (?) Also, some backgground wouldn't hurt, even though it would be very dark.
a few fixes on the proportions could help, like: the eyes could be alligned a bit more. Also, I see that the white in the eyes, compared to the rest are a bit bright...also, the pupils are a bit off placed, so he seem a bit "dead" in the face. the nose might be a "bit" to long ? And the under part of his lip are a bit big..sorry, I'm nitpicking
I brushed quickly over your picture, maybe you'll get a few ideas from that on other ways to approach it ? (I didn't include the tattoo and burnt skin, hope that doesn't matter )


and, keep up the good work

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[Seph|roth]

Nice, come replies, hehe, thanx for the kind words guys. I dont usually get mad because of lack of replies its just that after a while it kinda gets to ya......

Ill be sure to check out your threads too Superbug and hightop.

Frost : thanx a lot man, I really appreciate your kind words

Joachim : uhm, wow. Quickly you say, damn that is awesome..it looks much better than mine, im saving this to keep as a reference for later work, thanx a whole lot

Well cant stay long, ill be back more later expecting more replies
*crosses fingers*

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[This message has been edited by Seph|roth (edited February 04, 2001).]