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Author   Topic : "OK Liquid! i'm ready for my close up!!"
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 2:32 am     Reply with quote
http://ctrlzproduction.com/images/newwork/test-eve8.jpg

i think i'm done. =)

here's the page that they all are on. http://ctrlzproduction.com/html/artz1.htm

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 11:13 am     Reply with quote
I'm not liquid, but could I ask you something? What made you choose those colors? I'm not saying they're bad, or that you chose poorly at all. I'm just wondering why you chose turquoise, and pure red, and pure purple, and pure green, and grey blue.
They don't seem to fit together for me.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 11:43 am     Reply with quote
cripes man, ive seen this picture by you and variations of it in about 12 other threads.

looks pretty cool i guess, i like the background the best. the colors on her back dont mesh well at all, and her hair frightens me. the boobs could be rounder looking, i like the color choice on the torso

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 3:56 pm     Reply with quote
Hey -

I agree with Isric/Capn. I think you have a good start on your modeling, although there are spots (face, upper thigh, hair) that it needs more attention to detail. But I can see some of the basic ideas there. I would also try to localize your color choices a bit. In other words, don't use such pure color choices for everything.

I think you may not have your Gamma adjusted correctly. Try to get it calibrated.

Otherwise, a good start! Hope that's sort of useful.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 5:44 pm     Reply with quote
ok kool

i'll see what i can do about the gamma and i picked colors that stood cause everyone does the dark colors too much.

i'll see what i can try next. =D

thanks bub

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 6:35 pm     Reply with quote
To be honest I disagree with Liquid.. the lighting on the thighs etc seem very fine and normal to me....this Pic is truly amazing In my eyes...if I had to crit it tho. then i'd say the face is the only place that feels lacking in detail.. apart from that very good work! I love it

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 6:49 pm     Reply with quote
One thing that's been bugging me about this image is the bottom lip. I can't tell if the black spot is just a weird shadow or if the mouth is actually open in some strange way...

The mouth in the original drawing has always bugged me to an extent to, it's hard for me to make sense of what it's doing.

Hmm... I dunno

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 7:15 pm     Reply with quote
zor: What Liquid! is trying to say is that all the colors should pretty much stem from another. In other words there is no consistency between the color choices in this pic. Some are dull others are vibrant. There is no relation between them. A little hard to explain.. this is a quick example:



Original on the left.. mine is on the right. The colors are still too pure for my taste, but I didn't feel like coloring them over.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 12:27 am     Reply with quote
Zor thank you yeah i think it is a bit bright but fo first full cover not bad aye. =D

Jezebel yeah i know what you're talking about, the mouth and right breast just don't work right. thanks and hello fellow texan.

Chapel i see what yall mean, it's a good lesson. =D

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