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UGLY · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 7:20 pm

this my first try...anyone like 2 join me color this pic??

Bradford · Guest Member #

lose lens flars.

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Beardy · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 7:24 pm

How can he read in such poor lighting conditions?

dr . bang · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 7:59 pm

Too good to be a first try

More please!

UGLY · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 8:02 pm

bradford:
may be u can show me the rigt position..

bradford:
his not reading

Freddio · Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 4:15 am

loose flare..

apart from that

nightmare · Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 10:13 am

i dunno, i think the lens flare is fine. maybe make it a bit less opaque so its not so noticeable.

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futureskully · Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 10:20 am

Anyone remember those cartoons by SKYLOCK (kinda like a sherlock but was a fox..not that it matters). Where you take the first pic and look at it REAL hard then look at the second and say hmmmm whats missing. Try it with these ones you see what I mean [hint: wheres the bacon? wheres the other part of the paper?...can you find more hehe]

The bottle needs to lose its PUFFYness where I am sure is and effect on it...dont try to make a coloring of a 2d into a 3d art work with filters... use shading of colours etc...

Then again the above is only my opinion

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UGLY · Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 3:49 am

just 4 fun...hihih

synj · Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 9:53 am

forget the bad lighting conditions, how can he read with that black masking tape over his eyes? eheh

i don't like how the lens flare was used in this particular piece, either.

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edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

i like the lighting, i dont think you really need a lens flare. the only problem i have is the bottle looks kind of odd somehow.