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Author   Topic : "The Girl with no name??"
Zor
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 6:36 pm     Reply with quote
Well here is another piccy of a female.. this was mostly made from mind untill I needed to get reference (damm I still need reference) but.. each day is another day conquerd....

Havent thought of a name for her yet... so any suggestions?

Enjoy..



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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 6:56 pm     Reply with quote
That's really nice. It has extreme photographic-quality lighting!

As for crits, the lips are a little flat on top - my lips flatten and thin out only when I'm smiling (sorry, I didn't want to say it was the rule for ALL people... I'm not a lips expert!), and there is usually a shadowed depression where the lower lip meets the upper lip at the corners, even with a smile.

Get a CD out and look at your own lips for some general rules. Warning! Men's lips look different from women's lips!!!

Try to fix up the iris and pupil in the right eye, make it as sharp (and the same size) as the eye on the left, which btw, looks fabulous. Great shading on the eye cavity and underneath where it goes to the cheek!

The solarizing on the hair, specifically on the right, looks really neat. It's not realistic, but that doesn't stop me from liking it

And too much eye-liner for my liking, but that's a personal preference and not a crit. :P
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2001 5:02 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the reply... and yes. I see what you mean about the lips, (its amazing I dint notice this before) but as the tru old saying always means well.. :"If ya stand and stare at the same thing over'n'over.. then the erros become part of the picture" - I guess thats what happend to me.. now, I look at in from a diff height.. and boom I see your side of things... - thanks for your feedback!

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