[Flinthawk]

Dammit, STOP! I forbid you from kicking this much ass on a nearly daily basis.

Honestly though, another well done pic from you man. The pose is working for me...she isn't a sex pot or the strongest female presense but I think that suits the character based on the attire she's outfitted with...seems very low key, stealthy in a way, quiet but deadly. The only thing that bothers me in the slightest is her left forearm...the lines just seem too straight for my tastes. I just think that you could've worked the joint area better with a subtle change in line. I was really looking for that one though The texture and the outfit both kick ass while looking very functional...goes a long way in proving how much reference material helps make things look that much more believable (I believe you mentioned in one of your other agent threads that you refer to real clothing to help in your designs).

Anyway, great pic, keep up the awesome work!

-Flinthawk

[This message has been edited by Flinthawk (edited January 27, 2001).]

[Jezebel]

*swoons*

You are so great at this!

-Beth

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[Solitaire]

heyho, a counterstrike(ss)

[McSteed]

These past few pieces you've posted are awesome, but the skin tones bother me, as dose the shading of the skin. Perhaps both are the result of the colors used. Try putting a little orange in to the skin.

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[SporQ]

this is my favorite of your agents yet. i like the pose and colors and all.

i also really like that strap texture you've been using on these peices. i see a little prob with it though. it seems that you are just overlaying a patern on the parts that need a texture. like on her back pack, it seems flat, cause the texture doesnt follow the shape of the pack. im not sure if you see what i mean, but it seems like the "ribbings" should receed across the top of the pack. right now they all seem parallel.

just a minor gripe, but it stuck out to me.

keep up the great pics. and for god's sake, slow down!!

SporQ

[Bishop_Six]

Really nice, agent. The hunch is fine by me. Doesn't look weird or anything. I dig the blue glasses. Keep it up. No wait, don't... you're makin' the rest of us look bad.

Hey, I just noticed you live in Az too. Cool.

[This message has been edited by Bishop_Six (edited January 26, 2001).]

[Awetopsy]

Awesome Job.. shes a gorl Id like to see in a comic. I kinda like the hunched over look.. kinda refreshing from the all jutting girls in comics.

really well drawn excellent color... looks like youve got yourself a nice pic there.

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[kombosagi]

phat pic! I especially like the different textures, the "grenades" and the bag are especialy good.

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[Sergenth]

It's another awesome agent!

Kinda like Minnie Driver in the face... until the lips begin (I was watching the face develop as it downloaded :P)

Man, do a background. I want to see where she is hiding. Complete the story, even the bare wisp of a setting that your backgrounds offer in their comic-book stylings! Nroo!

It's funny how she's dressed in super-high tech spy gear, yet she wears Keds with no socks. I love the idiosyncracy

[burn0ut]

Wow that kicks ass agent!

[Magpie]

Truly cool!

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[Isric]

sweet, now you gotta make a water agent

[agent44]

Sorry no background, I just didn't get around to it. I'm moving so things are a little crazy. Anyway, I tried to make the face a little different like you guys have suggested, but I don't think it came out quite how I wanted. I got inspired by a J Crew catalog. Inspiration comes from the strangest places. A friend of mine said the pose was a little static, and that hunched women are a turn off. I can see what he's saying, but I'm curious as to what you think.



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[Chapel]

Another great job Jake. I hope you add a background to this one eventually. Maybe something true blue? The crotch area looks a little weird for some reason.

The problem with hunched women is that they usually looky dopey. Things to keep in mind for "Sexiness" is to arc the back and the shoulders should be at opposing angles to the hips. Something to keep in mind in the future.

By the way, didn't want to sound like I didn't like the pose.. was just saying what the problem with hunched women are. I like this pic.

[This message has been edited by Chapel (edited January 26, 2001).]

[nightmare]

i think her head is a little big for her body, but that might just bet he style. i like her tho, she's mega cool! i dunno about hunched women being a turn off, but the pose suits her.

ps. i love that strap texture!

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[Delucubus]

Well, it looks good to me, even the pose. I really like how you used the blacks and greys. I can easily see all the detail even there isn't much contrast in colors. One thing that sticks out to me though, is the lips. I can't tell why, maybe its their size and shape or it's their color. But anwya, nice pic, can't wait to see some more agents.

[napalm]

oOohh... really crisp, great job on the material textures! Could maybe use some sharper/harsher specular highlights on her outfit if its pleather-ish material. Great work on this one!

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[Francis]

Man. I dig it, hunch and all. Actually, I dig it because of the hunch - it's hard to pull something like that off successfully. You do some really nice stuff, please keep it up.


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[Seraphire]

Very nice. I'm really digging these agents.



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[CapnPyro]

looks great man, you do some crazy texture work, howd you manage those straps? The rubber latex also has a really nice tight smooth feel, i like how it isn't plasticy. The head sort of throws it off for me, not the size or anything, just from the glasses and hair it makes me think she should be in a coffe house sipping a double mochachino or somethin.

I like all your agents though, y ou need to make them a nice website to show them off

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[swampbug]

Boy ohh boy,, what's all the fuss over if you like the hunch or not. Who cares ! People can really assume that position, as well as many others. Sitting, standing on the head, balancing on one foot, doing pushups, curled up in a ball.

Good work, nothing is wrong with anything

[Cougar]

I just love those textures
You've been posting some real good stuff lately.

[spooge demon]

kewl. The grenades, yes, are really nice. The really subtle difference in the ellipse shows that they are sitting on a rounded form. There is some real fine attention in there

[Aimok]

Hey really great- I love the stile-I draw in kind of the same direction.
Better than some Digital-works of Shirow, but the face-ok, its not my taste, but this is your pic, so Im not allowed to critizese it.

Have U changed your stile?Your older pics were without a lineart,werent, they?

Cya

[Hightop]

I think she should get hear boobs bigger....

or maybe agents doesn't get that much money so they can afford a breast(?) operation..

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[Dives]

I think it rox i see no flaws

[Dan]

how many of these agents do u have and do u have one on a moterbike? Cause that would be cool.

[v1510nAry]

spinkee spanky (good)

mazingly l33t , its like its between vector and bitmap , which I think is really cool ..

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[marc_taro]

You have a cool thing going with these agents. Great characters.


My crit; I think your faces are too long, and the features are a bit large. Big noses and big mouths, and the mouths are too close to the chin. You could keep the cartoony character without doing such long faces. Try flipping the drawing and looking at it. I used to draw long noses habitualy...you might just be so used to it you don't see it anymore...

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