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Nex
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 Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 11:12 am |
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I could need your help on this one:
how could I enhance the atmosphere?
are the edges too loose, is something missing, contrast?
I'd be happy to hear what you think.
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- Nex
Mary, sweet lady of pain, always alone
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[This message has been edited by Nex (edited January 26, 2001).] |
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Solitaire
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| Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 1:46 pm |
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somehow I like it as it is full of funny associations 
the whole composition needs darker contrasts - I think that would help
yet there's only the dark green in the upper corner opposing those mid tones |
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Nex
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| Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 2:17 pm |
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yeah now that I look at it its very bleached out. In photoshop it looks a bit darker.. I guess my calibration is fucked up.
great you like it.. I was not sure if it was not too loose.
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Winding at light-speed through time
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kombosagi
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| Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 10:15 pm |
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nice start you could start shrpening bits of it to reduce the blurs. otherwise I like it.
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