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ceenda member
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 9:26 am |
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This is a portrait based on a photo of the British author Martin Amis which I found on the front cover of the Sunday Telegraph Magazine as I was reading the Sunday papers. It seemed to have quite a nice lighting approach and so I thought it would be quite good to do a painting based on the photo.
I think I made a few errors with the proportions that were hard to correct without starting again. In the photo, the subject is kinda slouching in an armchair. Also, the shirt is actually a reflective grey-purple nylon, but I decided just to go for a light grey colour.
The pic was done using Painter Classic. All in all, Painter is an excellent program which is marred by some really annoying problems. However, it has a nicer and more vibrant feel than Photoshop depending on how you use it.
There's a larger version here:- http://www.cee.hw.ac.uk/~ceenda/portrait1c_fullsize.jpg
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beekay- member
Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2000 Posts: 64 Location: california
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 9:30 am |
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your pic doesn't show and your link doesn't work.
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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 9:32 am |
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beekay- : For some reason I had to upload the files using FTP as a direct drag and drop in WinNT doesn't seem to work. Go fig. |
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aquamire member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 1999 Posts: 466 Location: duluth, mn, usa
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 9:43 am |
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Wow, very nice Ceenda. Your previous portraits, (most notably the rembrants) were a little to smooth, I thought.. this seems to be a little harsher, and more painterly.. probably because of you using Painter, eheh. How long did this take you?
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Weeks member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 92 Location: Switzerland..
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 10:53 am |
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Ceenda....!
Let me tell you just one word.. :
FORMIDABLE....! exaltant et talentueux.
I like very much the way you "play" with Painter that I practice for few years... but... could you tell me what do you think of mine ... ? (in the forum : Velazquez..This time, it was with photoshop)
Please tell me...
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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 3:15 pm |
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aquamire: Thanks! The pic took about 5 hours with a break for tea.
Weeks: Bonjour mon ami. Vous �tes un artiste extraordinaire.
Bg: Cheers! I'm hoping to see more dragons and crazy knights and other crazy stuff from you before long. :P
Flexible Elf: Thanks for the complements! Big fan of your DUNE stuff here. I know what you mean about Painter. One of my gripes is that you select a brush, change the settings, choose a different tool, go back to the brush and have to change all the settings again. Anyway, look forward to seeing your Painter stuff soon.
Mergatroid: Some very good crits there, thank you. The photo was on a glossy cover so I don't know whether that is why alot of areas seem so dark in the photo. Also, as you say, the jacket and shirt are a cold grey. I should have tried to get a hue that was closer to the purple colour in the pic which was warmer. Glad you like the hair.
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::Dino:: member
Member # Joined: 09 Sep 2000 Posts: 250 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 8:23 pm |
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Wow Great work Ceenda!. Do u think u could post the reference? I'm interested to see what you had to work with. Keep up the good work.
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 8:50 pm |
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Very nice ceenda. I do say that the clothign clashes a bit with the .. rest of the picture. Blasted photographers fault though! Anyway, the guy has no neck. But i'm assuming that the colalr is covering it up. From what I'm seeing, the colors are very dark on his clothign and you need to choose a bit warmer colors. Keep in mind that nothing in this world is PURE black and heh, yah. Also, ,it may just be the photograph, but his shoulders look extremely broad. But anyway, great job on the picture. Like the inside shirt, has a silk texture to it. ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Light member
Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 528 Location: NC, USA
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 9:02 pm |
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Looks great. This is very finished quality.
My only thoughts on it is the visualization of the egg shape on the right half of the face which disrupts the shadowed area. It looks good but I'm not sure its the best use of that space.
The only other thing about the head that might be improved is the ear.
Also.. I'm thinking a greenish color might look good behind him as the brown is sorta overused.
Anyway.. its nice. |
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Liquid! member
Member # Joined: 24 Sep 2000 Posts: 435 Location: Los Angeles, California
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 10:04 pm |
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Nice job! ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 10:12 pm |
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*gasp*
cool shtuff Ceenda ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 10:13 pm |
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Seriously... when I first opened this up, I thought it was the reference photo you used
That is REALLY cool. I love it
-Beth
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Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2000 Posts: 675 Location: Finland
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 12:20 am |
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Looks good, much better than your previous portraits!
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Flexible Elf member
Member # Joined: 01 Aug 2000 Posts: 642 Location: Parker, CO
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 12:22 am |
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That is way cool ceenda. That is a paint-worthy portrait for sure. Lots of fun lighting and wrinkles.
I'm tryin' my hand at Painter Classic myself. It's pretty neat. It's taking me a lot longer to finish this work (I'm workin on) than it does in Photoshop because I'm messing around with all the keen brushes.
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Mergatroid member
Member # Joined: 30 May 2000 Posts: 165 Location: Pasadena, ca U.S.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 12:29 am |
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Ceenda,
The head and the clothing don't seem to work together very well, their too seperate. Maybe the edge where they meet can be softer and the temperature of the greys in the jacket can get warmer. By using some of the color in the face on the jacket and vice versa can help to make them feel more harmonious. Yuo might even want to try taking all the color out and making it a grayscale image. The hair looks great, looks very natural.
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BooMSticK member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 927 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 2:58 am |
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very very nice! Just one thing - the highlight on his left next to the eye is too bright and should be toned down just a bit...
the clothes is just spot on. Very nice.
,Boom
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Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 803 Location: near Hamburg (Germany) | Registered: Mar 2000
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 7:59 am |
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So real!
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Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2000 Posts: 437 Location: Milford NJ USA
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 9:11 am |
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This looks like it was a lot of fun to make. It reminds me of the portrait guy who does a face every week for my local newspaper. Peter Ambush is his name. It's for a TV Guide sort of insert in every Sunday paper.
It must be a Sunday thing :P
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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 1:43 pm |
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: ino:: Thanks. I don't have a scanner at home, however, I'll try and scan it in using the departmental scanner if the opportunity arises.
EviLToYLeT: Thanks for the crits EviLToYLeT, glad you like it.
Light: Hmm, is that the 'viewers' right or the subject's right. However, I think I know what you mean, cheers.
Liquid: Thanks! Great to see you posting here again.
Rinaldo: Cheers. BTW, how many hours +GMT are you, as I always seem to miss you on ICQ.
Jezebel: Thanks Jezebel, I'm glad it tickles your fancy. Just dropped by your home page, you have a really nice website, and your photography portfolio is very cool indeed.
BooMSticK: You're right about the highlights, they're not as distinct in the photo. Cheers for the comments.
S4Sb: Thanks man.
Sergenth: Thanks. I think I know the kind of pics you're talking about. The thing is that they're often done to a tight schedule (1 week or less) so their often quite loosely painted and yet are extremely well done.
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Member # Joined: 19 Jun 2000 Posts: 197 Location: Norway
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:21 pm |
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Wow, this is really beautiful work. Ceenda. Love his expression, you have done a beautiful job. His hair is tremendous. I'd love to see more!
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el tigre member
Member # Joined: 27 May 2000 Posts: 463 Location: scotland
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2001 6:30 am |
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you never cease to amaze me Ceenda. that is sweet. So completely different than your early airships & sky cities but just as good if not better.
Hats off!
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