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Samson & Friends member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 106
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:35 am |
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Hi, this is supposed to be an actress, can you work out who it is?
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The hair never works, maybe it's because my drawing pen isn't pressure sensitive? |
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Wyatt Turner member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2000 Posts: 501 Location: Everett, WA, USA
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:41 am |
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wow, the face looks great! beautiful!
but, but, but, the shoulder looks to big and high. and yes hair needs more line work.
those eyes are awesome too.
Yet can't figure who it is!
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Ian member
Member # Joined: 19 Mar 2000 Posts: 1339 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 1:59 am |
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YES YES YES!!! The Face and skin is shaded masterfully! The eyes are quite beautiful as well, Me too says fix the sholder and maybe smooth the hair out. (WHO IS IT??)
Ian
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nori member
Member # Joined: 01 Apr 2000 Posts: 500 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:30 am |
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Julianne Moore |
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:41 am |
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Nose needs a little bit of work...Add some slightly deeper shadow to it, instead of the soft line you have going...(Everyone else has mentioned everything else) -- But I really like the job you did on her eyes/mouth and the general rest of her face...Good work!
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:56 am |
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the face looks great, it could use a little more value however. now the hair, it looks tangled, this may have come from the pre sketching. i would suggest making it looks more smooth/straight. other than that excellent portrait.
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diabolical junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 3 Location: san diego, ca, usa
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:46 am |
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great job...i agree the face could use a bit more contrast and maybe smooth the lines of the hair a bit. and i'm pretty sure it's heather graham...do i get a prize? |
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kardis member
Member # Joined: 14 Sep 2000 Posts: 88 Location: Fairfax, Virginia
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:51 am |
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Well, the file name is Jul1.jpg, so hehe. Wonder who, heck, I still don't know. Looks good, hair looks weird though. And about that shoulder, I think it looks fine (to me), it seems to be the style of her dress. Big fuffy shoulder-pad-thing. Hehe..
-Kardis |
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fazedesign member
Member # Joined: 28 Nov 2000 Posts: 115
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:53 am |
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Talent man, thats awesome. |
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toast! member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 442 Location: France
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 4:25 am |
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humm .. jodie foster ? |
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:11 am |
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I like the colours used here... but damned if I can tell what celebrity it is.
Anyway, I think the shoulder is meant to be a bit "lifted"... not a puffy sleeve, but rather that she is posed so that the shoulder is slightly higher (maybe based on a sitting position where the arm rests on the knee or something?) I think it looks good
Only small complaint I have is the hair... using individual strands like that can work, but then you need to show that some strands are outside of the main "bulk" of the hair, giving it a less flat look. And you need some highlights to give the hair life (as well as some shadows - now, it looks like the hair is more like a wool hat, without any real depth to it - you need to accentuate the individual locks more, and the strands a little bit less.) Am I making any sense?
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AdezJ member
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:32 am |
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*laugh* Adezj! I was avoiding posting that so it wouldn't seem like a shameless plug!
Guess it's different when someone else does it, though.
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stereophoenix member
Member # Joined: 02 Jul 2000 Posts: 152 Location: Sydney
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 6:51 am |
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I think it looks a bit like nicole kidman |
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Dives member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 392 Location: Finland
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 7:39 am |
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Looks wonderful. But the hair seems to have a lot less detail than the rest. And it also looks a bit flat in some places. |
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elam member
Member # Joined: 27 Sep 2000 Posts: 456 Location: Motown
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 9:18 am |
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Peg Bundy?
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Trance-R member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 1999 Posts: 360 Location: Burnaby, BC, Canada
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 10:22 am |
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Strikes me as Ms. Kidman! |
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 10:36 am |
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I definitely agree on the Julianne Moore vote.
Soften up that hair a bit and you'll have yourself a lovely portrait. ^_^
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Starseed member
Member # Joined: 14 Sep 2000 Posts: 144 Location: Vancouver, Canada
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:38 pm |
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I think it's suppose to be Julianne Moore, but where the features haven't been caried over correctly it gives the impression of Jody Foster and Heather Graham. I only lean towards Julianne the most because of the flaming red hair. The face needs to lose the 'overly-cuteness' aspect that makes it look like graham and foster (if you're going for moore). Moore has more of a beautiful face than the other two who are more 'cute'.
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Leethal junior member
Member # Joined: 28 Dec 2000 Posts: 23 Location: Huntington Beach, CA
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 3:49 pm |
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Heather Graham? |
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Samson & Friends member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 106
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:58 pm |
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Golly gosh, I didn't think I'd get so many replies. Thanks for the crits guys, I might do some more work on this image yet, by fixing the shoulder and using that handy hair tutorial that Enayla did (thanks for the link AdezJ).
And yes, it was supposed to be Julianne Moore! I guess I'll have to try harder at getting a likeness next time since only three people got it. Looking back, it does kind of look like Heather Graham and Nicole Kidman. |
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Dthind member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 10:15 pm |
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I Like, but hair has a *sort of* yarn look to it. Kind of appears as *another* layer, when it might flow better if blended. Cool Man, Cool |
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EBE member
Member # Joined: 11 Jan 2001 Posts: 173 Location: Delmenhorst, Germany
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 9:11 am |
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.....it�s Helen Hunt definetly
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kanabis member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 112 Location: QLD, Australia
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 4:15 pm |
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its definitely stone cold steve austin |
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WICKED member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2000 Posts: 275 Location: FL
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 6:32 pm |
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right on Kanabis! i place all my bets with kanabis.
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Collosimo member
Member # Joined: 30 Dec 2000 Posts: 551 Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 7:37 pm |
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Cool pic. face is good. shoulder weird. hair needs larger clusters of hair and darker undershading. Work on it...
what I really wanted to do was get in touch with Kanabis !!!!
you there? I'm from QLD too. Brisbane in fact. do you have icq?? I want to get in touch with you. My icq is in my user details.
so get in touch.. plz
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