[Scythe]

Hi, this is actually my first finished digital picture created with a wacom. I made it for a friend of mine who is making a website about coffee addicts (www.koffiejunks.com). What do you think?



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[shardik]

i think he should be facing the machine on his knees, otherwise he should have a more pained look on his face.. (edit)or he could have his head in his hands

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[This message has been edited by shardik (edited January 11, 2001).]

[Delucubus]

Hey, i kinda like it. I get the point of the picture right away. One thing that kinda bugged me was his shirt. It just doesn't look like it belongs there, maybe because of the lighting on it. Theres no real light source, just an ambient light.

One more thing about the shirt that bugged me was the lettering. Why did you put the writing the way you did? Why not just put the words in a bold cartoony font right down the middle.

[Strukture]

The shirt needs some shading pronto. Maybe add a tear or two to make the effect even greater.

[Scythe]

Hmm, guess you guys are right. I think i need some lightsource practice About the shirt, yes it is almost like it's... like a separate image or something.
Ill work on this, expect a mod soon

Tnx, for the crits

(look like it became a topic for Work in Progress )

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