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bdmf
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 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 10:18 pm |
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hi all...this is a painting i did today...i know that i got some of the colors and perspective off...but it was fun painting it....please comment ..and help me.!
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gne
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| Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 5:42 am |
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I can feel the wind! 
[This message has been edited by gne (edited January 10, 2001).] |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 10:27 am |
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well I guess the perspective is slightly off with the tree thingy on the left.. but overall I relaly like this pick of yours.. do some more...
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bdmf
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 9:33 am |
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| thanks for the replies.....is there anything esle that you see wrong with it.....it would relly help if you could give some pointers |
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shardik
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 10:38 am |
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thats hot, only thing i would say is to tighten up those rocks
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synj
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 10:40 am |
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a tree? I think that's a cliff but I dunno.
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Danny
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| Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 12:01 am |
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This is nice stuff..
I would clean it up first and foremost. And for sure add more foam. Not just around the rocks, but also on the surface in the background.
Keep going! 
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bdmf
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| Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 12:17 am |
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thanks for the replies....
yeah...your right syng...its a rock or cliff ...not a tree...
danny...i dont think that im going to tighten it....i was trying to get a feel for painting an outside scene.....as you can tell i dont know anything about painting rocks....i need more practice... but this is my first outside painting...
thanks again...for your crits
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