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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 12:45 am     Reply with quote
Here is another vista to examine. crit if you wish.





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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 1:56 pm     Reply with quote
Cool. a little blurry.. feels like it was grown in 3d
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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 3:09 pm     Reply with quote
nope! no 3D, just me and Photoshop. Another examination of trees. From memory...


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 6:35 pm     Reply with quote
Hi, Wyatt! I dig your stuff. Never critqued it before, though!

I like the colors, but my eyes are wanting a focal point for the image. They're naturally drawn the the center/horizon area, but they're left hanging! All that's there is a blurry, undefined horizon... they wanted to see something there! They're YEARNING for some visual interest, there! hehhe.

But anyway, keep churning out the cool stuff! See you around, Wyatt!

peace,
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 9:56 pm     Reply with quote
I just think the leaves need more color variation and perhaps a bit more definition
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 2:47 pm     Reply with quote
good comment, this image went somewhere, and the ending of it was not my intentions. I felt it's done, and I had no direction with this. it is what it is a study of light and foliage layering. well just my result.

on to better things.

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