[The Machine God]

I'm starting a new panting and I was wondering if anybody thought this was a cheezy composition. Or if anybody wants to give any kind of crits on this one.

Thanks

[nilpferd]

Looks like a nice composition, I would like to see what the main character is holding, or how he's looking.
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[ZippZopp]

looks cool, but one suggestion i'd have is that it looks like your main figure there is someone of significance, so you might want to try moving that horizon line up, making the foreground a bit longer and have it looking up more at your subject to make him seem bigger and more important. i hope that made sense

[The Machine God]

But if I bring the horizon line up won't that make it so we're looking down on the main character? I thought low horizon ment we are looking up?

[Shintaro]

hey there, I think your painting would have mroe "power" if u gave the knight some kind of dyniamic, it feels too static in this posture... like a statue...
and amybe give some darker colors... overall.

l8z