[slips]

Just a rough sketch of a character concept. I think the left leg is gimped.
Comments / Suggestions please please

[ October 24, 2002: Message edited by: slips ]

[JL]

At first I thought the arms were way too long, but after some tracing, I think the arms are about right, but the head seems a bit small and the neck, too long:



I think the knees would benefit from better definition, too. I like the costume a lot; good details in the belts and upper body. It would look even better if there were similar detail in the folds of the pants and in the boots.

[ October 23, 2002: Message edited by: JL ]

[DarkVVulf]

Maybe work on the eyes, they remind me of a jack-o-lantern. Probably because he doesn't have any eyebrows.
Echoing JL a bit- his right arm looks dislocated, try shortening it.

[slips]

Thanks guys, I will try it right away.
Its refreshing to get constructive criticism from strangers.