[Bare Bonez]

Hi, another portrait. Need someone to do an anatomy check on this one. Not too sure about the left shoulder if it's positioned correctly. Thanks.

[parky]

i think you should make her left shoulder more down and add more meat to her body. looks too skinny.

[Simoom]

the circle around the eye kinda scares me.

[JL]

You've chosen a difficult view... Don't know if this helps much, but here is how I'd try to do it:



- Bigger skull, smaller face.
- Far shoulder pretty much hidden.
- Watch the perspective lines in the background.

[ October 20, 2002: Message edited by: JL ]

[Bare Bonez]

Dude, this helps so much! Thanks a ton. Gotta go back and rework the sketch .

I'm aiming towards working my way to three point perspectives, so trying to get the 1 point perspective right.