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taidhbhse junior member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2002 Posts: 3 Location: north america
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Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2002 5:31 pm |
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ive come this far and im at a loss as to where i should proceed with it. any suggestions, even if they're just to let me know i should forget photoshop and stick to word processing, are apprectiated! thanks.
[ October 19, 2002: Message edited by: taidhbhse ] |
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taidhbhse junior member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2002 Posts: 3 Location: north america
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Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 10:56 am |
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is there some sort of club i have to join to get people to look at my stuff? |
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Simoom member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2002 Posts: 302 Location: nc, usa
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Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 1:26 pm |
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yes you do, 39.99 a month, made payable to me.
looks like a Marina from hell version of the main character in the n64 game Mischief Makers, if anyone remembers that.
It looks pretty good to me, I'm not sure what else you'd need to do with it, although I'm not sure why you inconsistently have a white aura around the body. The shading and coloring is good, but you could probably use some definition to the outline on the sides of the bottom of the legs, and occaisionally it looks like your coloring is escaping the line art (like there's some blue invading the chain).
Good pic though, and if you insist and switching back to word processing, you should at least make pretty ascii art. |
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johan_san junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2002 Posts: 22 Location: Gresham Oregon
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Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 9:45 pm |
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Wow... thats preatty sick ... I especially like the inviting claws and the skull as a chest plate. But... I dont see any texturing... Great concept thought.
I'm a newb too. Photoshop is Awesome... Get Your Money's Worth and learn as much as you can... ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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egerie member
Member # Joined: 30 Jul 2000 Posts: 693 Location: Montreal, Canada
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Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 9:20 am |
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desaturate. |
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