[Ryknow]

Hi maybe someone can help this type of work was inspired by watchin hellraiser i am so sick of lookin at it i just dont know what else can be done C&C welcome and i use angelfire so youll have to drag and drop. sorry guyshttp://www.angelfire.com/art2/aceraphin/masochism.jpg

[Hase]

I�m having some trouble figuring out what is where... you should try and focus on some anatomical details, you can bring those out during coloring, don�t use airbrush/smuge that liberally, use plain colors first to create the main surfaces, then do the detailling later.... for starters don�t do any smudging at all, it forces you to pay attention to color and light.

[Max]

You should clean up the whole pic.
I personally wouldn't choose so many differnt bright colors.
And before you color something try to get the mainshapes right.
The linework is very important.
Practise on paper - it's much easier this way to learn ( at the beginning )

Keep on