[Futura]

Well, as the topic says, this is a work in progress of Adriana. Two hours so far. Mostly due to my box crashing every half an hour.
I need critiques on this, there is so much that can go wrong if I don't correct it now.
Adriana Karembeu
Tell me how it is so far...
Futura

[ October 07, 2002: Message edited by: Futura ]

[crazybread]

I like the way you have this girl layed out. She looks beautifull. If I can suggest some stuff though:

the left eye seems to be just a little too wide. Also I would show the left nostril. Her ear should point inword on a slant toward the earlobe when you're finished with it. Deppending on what style you're going for I would suggest that you either do a clean outline of the whole sketch )Imean no hairy lines here ) or mask the biggest shapes and try airbrushing the different features as you build on it. (that is if you're not use to the paintbrush [I am talking about photoshop]).

She is beautifull though.

good job so far futura!

[Hase]

I agree with crazybread, one thing I�d like to add: the left corner of her mouth needs some cleaning up, the lips bulge a bit too much, it makes the teeth seem to stick out.. try flattening the lower line of her upper lip a little.

[Futura]

Thank you very much Hase and Crazybread.
Well, I have updated it a bit, I haven't ahd the time to completely revamp the pic, but I have added some depth to the eyes and to the mouth. I hope that by adding some shading, I have at least temporarily fixed the problems with the mouth. I haven't worked on the ear too much because I am going to have some sort of an earring there and am trying to decide what I want to put there. And the left nostral is kind of a toughy right now, but later on when I am fine tuning the facial features and not using such a big brush I will paint in a hinting of the left nostral...
Thank you very much for the critiques, and please point out if there is still anything that I can fix on this latest (small) update.
Futura

[B0b]

quote:

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Originally posted by Futura:
Wdue to my box crashing every half an hour.

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what OS u running, whats the spec of ur machine etc, mayb we can stop it from bombing

[Futura]

Well, currently I have an old WD drive that is constantly giving me a headache, so I went out and got a brand new Maxtor 80 gig ATA 133 drive. Yum.
And then there is the fact that I have Win98 on the 8 gig drive, which coupled with an old and failing drive makes the digital equivalent of hell.
But all will be good when I finish with the new Maxtor in a few days as I have buffer partitioned the drive into several different drives so that I will have to try very hard to corrupt files from one partition to another...
Hopefully I will be done tonight and be able to install everything, but if not I will be able to resume work tommorrow.
Futura