[Ranuzan]

I finally had some time to sit down and put to use some of the suggestions I got last week (thanks to Max and AndyT), and I /think/ it's looking alot better.

Oh, and I know there's some anatomical issues. Some are because I'm trying to give it somewhat of an artificial/cyborg kind of look, and others (like the left shoulder) are simply pissing me off.

Suggestions are more than welcome.

[Max]

You improved !!!!
Well done.

Andy's tip isn't bad but you also could try my
way.
Alright: Lower opasity is my suggestion. Bigger brushes like Andy said. And not ONLY the penicil brush. I know alot people say "take the pencilbrush" but i'ts anly good for deail ( me thinks ) and for the body a airbrush at 50 percent hardness is better.....find the way which works best for you.

Btw.: add more colors. a bit reddish/yellowish/pinkish brings more reality IMHO.

- max

[Ranuzan]

Thanks for the suggestions. I'll probably put them to use in my next work, as I'm getting a little tired of looking at this one

Oh, and I chose these colors to give it a more artificial "cyborg"-ish feel. I'll try for more realism next time.

[Hase]

looks good, the only thing that sticks out is the shoulder you mentioned... the arm seems to be a little too far out - how about lengthening the biceps a little, as well as moving the whole arm (including the triceps) a few points to the left? Then his torso and back won�t seem so massive.