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n8
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some dood with a gun...i was inspired after looking at starcraft:ghost concept art and stuffs...it looks soo cool...i wanna play it now!!...anyway...am i doin ok so far with this..i dont want to take it any further in case theres something majorly wrong with it..
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Basement bound
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| Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2002 9:47 am |
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| n8- looks pretty good go with it. I can only suggest that you look at moving the foreground leg a little to the right just to solidify the center of gravity. he looks a bit off balance. |
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Torstein Nordstrand
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| Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2002 9:49 am |
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| Check for balance issues. Seems to me he's tipping backwards. |
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allfiction
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| Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2002 12:48 pm |
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I agree about the stance issue. Nice start anyway! Looks like there could be some pretty suit design in the end.
By the way, does anyone remember the starcraft artwork by duck? That kicked major behind. Does he have a homepage? |
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n8
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| Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2002 8:23 pm |
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thanks for the comments...will fix 
i remember ducks starcraft stuff...they were sweet.
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n8
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| Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2002 6:29 am |
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okie dokie...theres something wrong with the pose...damnit..i ended up fixing the balance prob..but i liked the off balance look better so i switched back..sort of..hes leaning against a wall now
i think the trigger arm is weirdoed..paintovers appreciated
ps. i think i broke it...my sketches always look better..they kind of lose bits and pieces here and there...he looks kinda unk now 
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allfiction
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| Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2002 10:10 am |
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ok, i'll give it a try about the pose. I think the problem is not the direction of the torso, but rather the angle between the legs. Try directing the front leg more outwards(more pointing towards the viewer), that would solve the balance issue I think. I'm sorry I can't do a paintover since my wacom is screwed up, but this will hopefully help.. And, me too likes the first sketches wee bit more. Guess it's the lack of smudging. I like the gun more in the first ones, too. the perspective is rather difficult to handle in your last alteration. Just don't exaggerate it, I guess.. Hope i'm not a complete pain in the ass. I'm looking forward to seeing this in the gallery forum! Good luck!
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