[jester1966]

Here�s a preliminary sketch for my comic project �The Heart of Caran-h�rok�. This is a scene when the main character Thoran remembers himself sitting on the knees of his grandfather Than Harbad being told the story of how Harbad got a special sword from an important Albic leader. I feel that there are some mistakes in this sketch and would be very thankful if anybody could point them out and help me to correct them.

I�ll be off this forum for a few days due to a friend�s wedding but hopefully find some replies to this by Thursday next week.

Jester1966

[Bibbit]

Generally, I like it. I'm no anatomy expert, but I'll tell you what I see. The grandfather's forehead looks too long. Otherwise, he looks fine, if a little muscular.

The kid looks like a mini adult to me. I think his head is to small and kind of off center. His chin looks too tucked in his neck. And his right shoulder looks wrong.

Hope this helps.