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Martin Rebas
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 14, 2002 9:36 am     Reply with quote
A first attempt at high-contrast near-photorealism. The people were drawn from scratch, but I've used some reference for the background and the wrinkles on the coat. My question is: what are the most glaring errors? (What makes it look different from a high-contrast photo?)





A detail at 200%:



/Martin
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AndyT
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 14, 2002 12:05 pm     Reply with quote
Too bright? Especially the faces I guess. Missing shadows/texture?

The left half of the bg does not make sense or is not as easy to ?understand? as the right one?

I'd either change the backgrounds color (black/gray) or change the figures (darker blue)...

But I guess it's the brightness that bugs me most.
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kana
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 4:46 am     Reply with quote
the girl's eyes are way too big.
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