Sijun Forums :: View topic

bM · Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2002 2:18 pm

Here is my latest sketch for my next airbrush image.
This is a 35% size of original.

Tips on how to improve it are welcome.

Sinner and Saint:

Thanks in advance!

Sincerely
-bM

DeviantArt portfolio: http://bm.deviantart.com

Homepage: http://www.nalf.it

[ September 16, 2002: Message edited by: Nalfaren ]

Jabo · Posted: Sat Sep 14, 2002 7:32 pm

WTF? Where are the legs? It looks like they are ripped off, no good!

The face of #3 should be done again, her nose is to big, the eyes are dead, give em some variance...

Work on #2's eyes, they seem off, the left one is stronger than the right...

Remove the crease on the angels belly, around the bellybutton...

Nice pic, I like it. Now in Color

bM · Posted: Sun Sep 15, 2002 8:03 am

Hey.

Thanks for your comments, the facial details and the belly button is gonna be fixed later. THe sketch was more to tell me where the hell it should be ;D

Im currently at draft 7:

I KNOW THE RIGHT FACE IS FUXXORED

Im gonna fix it tomorrow.

Thanks in advance

Sincerely
-bM

[ September 15, 2002: Message edited by: Nalfaren ]

joacim_nitz · Posted: Sun Sep 15, 2002 6:15 pm

U know i love it! Keep it up!

B0b · Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2002 7:10 am

tails look odd..

egerie · Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2002 9:19 am

thanks for the nudity warning

Any reference pics ?

bM · Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2002 10:44 am

yes my skill is not good enough yet to draw without photo as a reference for poses and sizes. But soon

Sorry about the nudity, i will warn in the future, im a newbie in this forum.. thanks.

Sincerely
-bM