[ReXX]

working on this:


Got inspired by some books of George R. Martin. I started fine with broad strokes etc. and not really doing any detail that much. But my problem now is to get a bit more depth to the picture and sort of clearing the foreground, but still adding stuff to it (if you know what I mean). I'll deal with the background later.

So rain me with suggestions :-)

[Max]

GooD

Nice atmosphere.
Nice lightning.

You should clean the foreground a bit.
It's hard to see the persons which are mixed with the ground.

Good again. Kepp it up........

- max

[ReXX]

continuing:


Blah.

I think I went for the details a bit too soo even in this version. That has been my problem with pictures before and I felt very good when I started this one (and realized + saw that broad strokes etc. give alot of definition even though they are simple and crude). I'm sort of aiming for that Craig Mullins detail-in-the-right-place -kind of thing, but haven't really cracked what's the big secret (so to say).

Now I sort of feel like deleting a great big chunk out of the picture and starting over

I added some red halo on the bottom of the picture, sort of saving private ryanish-like and I wasn't sure why I did it, but it seems to work in my opinion. Sort of puts you in the scene more.

[DrDel]

the body parts (especially the extremities) seem out of proportion..