[xbytes]

hi guys, almost finished i hope. I realized the thumb in the hand is wrong but well....

i would like C&C on anything else please.
hope u like it

[Electro]

Very atmospheric.. I really like the concept.

However, some things don't sit right with me:

1) The whole face.. something just doesn't feel right about it. I think you should re-do the black outlines. Also, why is there a dark blue shadow overlapping the mouth in a different angle? It doesn't look right.

2) The hair.. it's pretty hard to see it.

3) The floor is too... "vanilla". I think it would be nice if you added some scratches and broken tiles to it to give it a grittier look. Also, maybe add some very gentle reflection to it?

4) The neck is way, wayyyyyy to long.

5) The shadow on the floor doesn't really match the head and the angle it's tilted at.

6) The body muscles don't look right.. it looks like his tummy is sucking itself on the inside. :P

7) It's probably because you forgot to adjust the layer opacity.. but if you look closely you can see the edge of the tub right through his shoulder.

Sorry if I was too harsh..

[xbytes]

thanks Electro, ill work on that.

ill post again when im done with the corrections.

[Loxley]

The concept may be sound, but I cant even begin to list the number of things wrong with this picture.

Anatomy and perspective are off by a couple miles. Try again.

[Bilbo]

and shouldn't the thumb be on the left side of the hand rather than the right? :-)

[bM]

I dont think that anything should be changed in the person itself. I like it the way it is. I think it projects the dark feeling over the image. I like it.. Perhaps adding some details and fixing some lightning.

great work.

Sincerely
-bM