[INTENSE]

Hey guys,

Having a bit of trouble with this one, the cloth just doesn't look right to me. This will be a knight, with one huge ass sword. Dark knight tho, no nice guys.

ANy ideas?

[SouL]

Mmmm. I like this kind of stuff. I hope you don't mind, but I saved your image and did a quick fix to show you what I had in mind to fix your hood problem



The red shows a new sillhouette for the hood itself. It's kind of hard to understand. But try having the hood bunch up some more at the back of his neck.

The yellow box squares off the area I think you should smooth out some. Unless his hood is really stiff, I think that section should flow more smoothly down towards his neck, unless he has some sort of helmet undreneath.

Looks ace.

[Thuduil]

one thing is
if its a cloak, the stereotypical material used for cloaks are usually soft and dont really have any parts that stick upwards by itself, i.e the collar on the cloak kinda contradicts the way you have drawn the cloak, as u see behind the knights head, the cloak appears soft and then stiffens out to form the collar

=p then again i could be totally wrong, but thats my 2 cents

[capnvtec]

Lookin good, is that canson paper you are using?? I love drawing with just a white and black colored pencil on canson paper, it looks soooo cool. Anyways, looks good, keep it up and hope to see it finished soon.

[dARCKLOWN]

Very cooooool stuff! i love it and its not even finished! cant wait for the finished version!