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Author   Topic : "c&c on balarina plz (mild nudity i guess)"
sP
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 3:52 pm     Reply with quote
hey ppl. at first i was trying to draw a girl that got hit with an object under the chin and was gettin thrown back due to impact. instead i came up with this. aint it funny how that can happen >.<



some constructive critisizm plz, thnx in advance
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Electro
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 4:11 pm     Reply with quote
Ehm.. the anatomy seems pretty wrong. I'm not expert by any means, but the head looks too big and the legs look too long in comparison to the size of her body..
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sP
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 7:06 pm     Reply with quote
head to big, legs to long, i guess that means i hafta shrink the head and make her have a longer stomach....anyone else?
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 19, 2002 1:16 am     Reply with quote
not dramatic enough..
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Odie
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 19, 2002 1:24 am     Reply with quote
Her right breast looks like it should be pointing out more. Right now it's leaning inwards and it looks funny.

Reminds me of some of picasso's line paintings.
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