[n8]

hey all...turns out im not patient enuff these days to sit down and actually finish anything off to a great degree of quality..eh well...heres some sketches.

hmm..wot to put as a bg?..i was thinking a strip joint or something along those lines..hehe..

dont really know what to make of this one..??..get rid of the wings?..i dont know!!..

ive done a previous jet bike thing before, but it was more beefy..??..
and ive got a whole lot of other unfinished stuff i wanna post..but i really need to try to finish something.. anyway...comments..i like comments!!..pleese...
cheers yall

[Max]

Boah, the perspective in the first is just,...not off but,...well

The second is nice but I don't like the wings very much. Just my opinion.

Last one is,...interesting thought

[SpiralEye]

Ditto what Max said. Yeah toss the wings. I notice that you're drawing with lots of short lines. I think just putting a smoother finished line quality would do a lot for your pics.

But that's just my humble opinion. I'm big on line quality right now.

Royal

[Starman]

woot.

[n8]

ah thunk ya...yeah...ill try to fix the first one..i think its just the perspective has been exagerated too much..?..ill see what i can do with the line work too, ive always drawn like that...ill dry up the quality of it..