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nexusnet · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 9:42 am

opinions

Loxley · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 10:32 am

Conceptually, it is an interesting piece. It is technically deficient in its rendering, though. Try again.

Cendol · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 2:01 pm

I don't see whats wrong with the rendering.
True..you can ofcourse render it in a totally different way...but can you explain why it's wrong to you ?

I kinda like it

xmmx · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 2:16 pm

Cool idea.
Something seems wrong about the way the robot it walking it almost looks like it is walking up a hill and/or it is running and in that case it is not throwing up as much dirt as it should. It lacks the overall sense of scale that would make it work, I can't really help you to much as I am a novice my self but I suggest you take a few hour break then come back and look at it.

TheSublime · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 2:41 pm

Bien hecho compatriota. Tienes mas?

R.

mitch · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 9:56 pm

Ill try and elaborate on the completely vague and unhelpful post you got about poor rendering, although who knows what exactly they thought the problem was because they were completely vague and unhelpful. Im pretty sure you colored the whole thing using the gradient tool, right? Not only that but it seems like you didnt put much thought into lighting. If your going to use just the gradient tool (and I dont think you should) you need to be even more concerned with proper lighting because its that much more simplified, so you have to get it that much more right in order to pull it off. Your drawing skill implies that you have much more skill than you are demonstrating throug your coloring, which leads me to believe you are being lazy. Ive seen your earlier panels and those are very well drawn too. I dont remember seeing such a problem with the colors in those. Maybe this is just very rough colors, in which case I will be very excited to see it when you are finished

B0b · Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2002 1:54 am

did the larger character just teleport in? cos i can't see any foot prints leading up to where it is now.. and why does it take such small steps?

[ July 31, 2002: Message edited by: B0b ]

nexusnet · Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2002 4:05 am

thanks
I expect to paint better the following one

This it is the following one

opinions

B0b · Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2002 5:30 am

no fallen trees from where they've been walkin, also the cloak could go over the tops of the tress where its been draggin though them...

Returner · Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2002 3:57 pm

like it, nice drawing