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Teknoholic · Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2002 12:00 pm

I'm kind of floundering but I know it's not done. Help me out.

JaVa-Original · Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 10:30 am

nice work dude...(sorry for drawing on your pic..couldn't resist)..that's the only way I can help others.

http://www.geocities.com/java90002000/thundergirla.JPG

[ July 24, 2002: Message edited by: JaVa-Original ]

Teknoholic · Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 9:49 pm

I'm just seeing a RED X...

faeklone · Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 11:29 pm

Take the URL, and add a space before the "http://" in your browsers address window. For some odd reason most time that works to get to see the pics.

Java: You basically summed up all that needs to be done in that picture beautifully. Too many bright colours and not enough contrast in the original.

Technoholic: Keep plugging away at it. It's looking good so far, just keep in mind the idea of value when working with colour and learn to mute some of the colours. War pieces work better with muted colours.

B0b · Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 1:33 am

java, ur hair is wrong, shes african not european... and she has dreadlocks not wavey hair

your style is nice,

but Teknoholic's drawing is growing on me as i look @ it, it has a nice style all of its own..

your missing motion tho'

B0b · Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 5:32 am

tek, don't think they get clouds like that in the desert, loose em..

m8 of mine, his dad is photographer, he took a lot of photos when he was working in africa. take a look @ his site to get some ideas for backgrounds

African Wild Images

i think that its comming together well tho

[ July 25, 2002: Message edited by: B0b ]

cptoonz · Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 3:59 pm

Hi, I like this pic...nice action and an interesting character. Cool doo rag

Anyway, it may be intended, but it appears that she is trying to saw off the target's legs with her MAC-10..the angle is awfully low (but again, you may have intended this)...The tiger/sabre-tooth/cat bloke in the BG appears to be reclining on a shelf to me, as opposed to running. Are these her targets? If so then the low angle on the MAC jives...just curios. Good detail work on the weapons and armor in my opinion!