Sijun Forums :: View topic

Scott Keating · Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 12:56 pm

I haven't posted here before but I like alot of the stuff I've see so I figured I'd give it a go. The hand with the glow isn't quite done, but aside from some cleanup, everything I'm happy with.

Thanks for any feedback

J Bradford · Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 2:59 pm

Pretty kickass, as a suggestion I would add something below his hand, like a dead creature being raised from the dead; that would help balance the composition some more and just make the picture more interesting.

GUYJIN · Posted: Mon Jul 22, 2002 5:58 am

Very nice work. I would try to do somenthing with the raindrop lines thogh.. cose they look like ..well.. lines. Other than that its really cool!

Incubus · Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2002 3:12 am

Whew thats creepy... I like the mood of it.
Good lighting so far! I�d try to put some more brighter areas on the glow itself and on his clothes. The highlights on his clothes look a bit too red to me.
Maybe it would look good, if you�ll put some greenish/blueish highlights on the clothes on his arm, so they�ll get some sort of a wet look.

Awesome work so far! Can�t wait to see the finished pic!

faB · Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2002 5:51 am

The rain is great! Maybe add a few droplets here and there under the hand, the cloth..

B0b · Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2002 6:02 am

yeah a few spings off of the hand and clothes would make it look like he was standing in the rain

Scott Keating · Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2002 10:45 am

Well, I fiddled with the hand a little and added some water highlights/droplets. I think you're right, it places him 'in' the rain more. Thanks for the tips

( it's a little smaller to save space on my webpage

Vesper · Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2002 12:16 pm

It just screams Creepshow!!!

Reminds me a little of Death in Monty Python's Meaning of Life. I think he needs a Teddy Bear. Something nice and fluffy.

true grit: I don't think its the shoulders, but his right arm/hand that makes it look a little funny. The hand is out of proportion, and the arm should be slightly longer. Well, that's my take on it anyway;
I was just thinking he may have broken himself so his shoulder juts out like that.

[ July 23, 2002: Message edited by: Vesper ]

Jeise · Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2002 11:58 pm

I'm not totally confident in my own anatomical knowledge, but the dude's left shoulder sort of drops away at a strange angle. Shouldn't the arm come out more, and if not, shouldn't the cloth drop straight down off his shoulder?