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A/R
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 Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 6:35 am |
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Hi Yall$...
My name is Augusto Reis...
...i�m 19 yrs old and i am from Brasil !!!
= )
...so , sorry 4 my bad English !!!
...here is something that i did a few months ago...
>USE : just a illustrator 10 !
C&C are wellcome !!!
ThanxXx...
[ July 20, 2002: Message edited by: A/R ] |
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neff
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| Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 7:46 am |
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Welcome!
Well, in my opinion the picture looks pretty boring. Only fonts in grey colors and a fast drawn face. Whats about some more Detail in the face? or some colors? |
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B0b
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| Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 8:18 am |
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i think its pretty good for a 'Vector Image'  but the background could do with a little colour |
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oDD
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| Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 8:18 am |
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| yeah, what NeFF said |
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A/R
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| Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 9:44 am |
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ThanxXx guys...
...this was just a wasting time illustration , i think i don�t want to wast more on this !!! hehe...
...thanx 4 the coments !
..here is another vector >>>
L8rrr...
[ July 20, 2002: Message edited by: A/R ] |
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Fafnir
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| Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 5:28 pm |
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i like the first one with the face, but it could've been planned out better, the signature leads the eye to the bottom left corner, and ones eye would be much more entertained on the face.
if you placed the face in a better location on the image, and added a little bit of colour, such as a red line for the lips instead of a white one it'd look somewhat less repetative. *shrugs*
but that's my two useless cents. now off to play bust a move 4. |
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THE LAST GOONIE
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| Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 7:48 pm |
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| Its clear in the second image to what kind of style you have! I like the first image for the very fact that it lacks overwhelming detail. If you look at japanese art or oriental art for that fact, they keep it simple, i think its called wabi sabi or something like that. art is not all about detail, but if it is going to be simple it should be balanced and well composed. also my 5 cents, cause we dont have 2 cents any more! |
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MarshallX
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| Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2002 8:14 pm |
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| Ya know....when I first looked at this piece, i didn't think oh that looks bad, and that is a first for me, on the other hand I said, wow, that really is catchy. Its not like its a digital masterpiece, but its catchy and deep if you look at it the right way. Once you start to study it more and read everything you realize that it doesn't make sense at all, but isn't that what art is? |
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A/R
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| Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 9:22 am |
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ThanxXx guys !!!
...thanxXx alot !!!
...yeah , i like it simple...
=) |
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