Sijun Forums :: View topic - witchblade (I tryed again from beginning)

J-D Leon · Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2002 4:27 pm

stunning.
i can't believe u can improve it this much over night.

and i am sure u got the potentia. but i thoutht that the girl in witch blade is cacausion not oriental. so, i think her eyes should be more horizontal.

and if u are going to draw it. please do it what other pro do. . . from the coloring, it remains me something blury will happen. try to make it sharp. n make it look real.

Jojo81 · Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2002 11:18 pm

Ok guys.
Thanx for your advices.
I decided to redo it from the beginning since it was impossible to correct it.
So here it is with new proportions:

I tryed to fix all the problems (shoulders, face, hair, breast).

It is still not finished but I did a quick paintover to study the colors I want to use.

Tell me what u think!
Your critics really help me!

[ July 16, 2002: Message edited by: Jojo81 ]

Jojo81 · Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 12:57 pm

ok, I cleaned it up (well, I had to redraw all the lines).
Yup I know, she's american, but I couldn't resist and I made her eyes oriental : p
Anyway, she's not sara pezzini.. she's just another girl

here's the pic.
if anyone wants to do a paintover, your welcome! I can upload a greater resolution if u want.

faB · Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 1:43 pm

The cleaned up drawing looks good to me. Her left fore arm seems a bit thin, the shoulders bulge a weee bit outwards (that or the outline of the arm make the shoulders look a bit like balls), otherwise pretty good!

B0b · Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2002 3:49 am

reminds me of the creature u have to kill in HL

neff · Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2002 8:53 am

Checking out my new Wacom...

Fafnir · Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2002 6:49 pm

the arm with the fancy doodads on it looks too flat.
looks awesome though