[Funk Master Kane]

Well here Is a new image i started. I am no where near close to finishing it yet, but I want some tips and suggestions to fix it before I go to far with it and make it harder to edit.
any suggestions are welcome

[ July 14, 2002: Message edited by: Funk Master Kane ]

[SG]

Your cg'ing is looking better already, with more consistent coloring and shading. ^_^
It still needs more atmosphere though. You need more shading in the areas untouched by light, and the only two lights right now seem to be the swords, so the back and side of his head would be darker, underneath his shoulder, etc.
I don't think the lights coming out of the swords are aligned correctly with the handles...they look, off.

Be sure to add more shading and detail to the helmet also, as it looks a little plain right now. Keep working on it. ^^
For some reason, I like the shading on his shoe. It looks really cartoonish. ^_^ Hehe.

[mitch]

your anatomy is broken. draw the torso and hips behind the foot. theres no way it all got covered up by his foot. draw it all out and youl see. other than that its lookin tight.

[Funk Master Kane]

Well here is my picture now, i have come a long way now, but I dont think it is finishd, I think i need more work on the background. and maybe a tad mor on my guy, and then I will be done

[ July 15, 2002: Message edited by: Funk Master Kane ]

[ July 15, 2002: Message edited by: Funk Master Kane ]

[Mangled Alecto]

by having the foot directly pointed at the viewer, it causes a confusion of the anatomy. try making a similiar dynamic pose without the leg and foot aimed directly at the viewer

its distracting, and if you changed the pose to keep consistent with a dynamic pose
i think it would work out better

just my 2 cents

[RaykastCS]

Just a note from a guy who is experienced in martial arts, when people do that sort of kick they usally have there foot turned up more. Its more functional when landing, not to mention a little more comfortable.