[grasshoppa]

yah, something bothers me about the picture, it doesn't seem... right somehow. Any clue as to what I could change to make this piece better? I'm praying for C&C here. Thanks. oh yah, and a little ref used.

[cptoonz]

Hi,

Well, first-ouch!...kind of gives me the willies lookin' at it. So far it seems good to me. You may want to post the ref so folks can compare. Off the cuff, to me, his face appears slightly tilted/shifted to one side...but given the subject matter, that works...I would keep going. Nothing seems "wrong" to me, per se. Hope that helps

[EviLToYLeT]

too much white maybe ... looks great though. sliver of ground between his legs looks a bit odd.

[tom deslongchamp]

Something that could improve it would be paying closer attention to the shoulder structure. Define the edges more clearly.

[RaykastCS]

The way he is positoned in on the floor is a real glaring flaw. you should work out the perspecitve on the floor a little bit more acording to the body.

[ventzik]

nice shadfing on the face... concentrated on the head - it's tilted but eye line is not... and cut off some of the bran, seemed a little too much for a human;-)