[Jojo81]

this time I'm trying with witchblade theme...
can someone help on proportions? I'm not sure it looks right, but don't know what to do...

[my scanner sucks]

[J-D Leon]

it is pretty good.
u should focus more on the shoulder and the neck, shoulder can be abit more lnger, and since it is short, it makes the neck looks to long. try to fix the shoulder first. if it still not good then go to the neck...

one more thing. the face is kind long, and the hair. should be bollet like, now it is like a butt head. sorry, i dont know what words i should use to describe this, thats the best that i can do.

other than other, i like the boo and the hands. they are fantastic.

this is what i mean:

[latsami]

leon, i think yours have too big shoulders
jojo, well, yours are too small ^^;;

here's what I propose :

[Sumaleth]

Nice re-proportioning there Leon.

[faeklone]

Latsami: From big shoulder to muscular...... just an observation.

So far I do like Leon's redrawing the best, however it does have some issues. The shoulders shoule be a bit cloer together and her thighs could be a bit more streamlined.

But to the initial drawing, the issues that Leon didn't cover is the breasts. They're too circular and not that teardrop shaped. Also it would add more interest into the drawing if you had the witchblade going out farther along her body, and more in tendrils than the full areas you have it in now.

Good start, now keep it going!