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RaykastCS · Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2002 4:54 pm

Hello, I used to post here a year ago. Glad to see this place is alive and kicking. I need some help on where to go with this picture. Not sure what I should do. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

[ July 01, 2002: Message edited by: RaykastCS ]

RaykastCS · Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2002 4:59 pm

damn tripod,

Click here if you dont see it

Arg!! here is the url.
http://raykast.tripod.com/Images/Gallery/Swatwip1b.jpg

[ July 02, 2002: Message edited by: RaykastCS ]

gigatron · Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2002 5:09 pm

still cant see...

Mag82 · Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2002 5:36 am

Drag the link into the address bar and the picture will be displayed. Same trick works with geocities.

I like the picture! The little characters in the background look a bit odd though, dunno why. Maybe too detailed (edgy) for background stuff.

Here's what I'd do if I could draw as good as you

: Since the weapon's not done yet, why not doing some 'imaginary' warfare... like trying to make the weapons look imaginary (like the wireframe-like look the pistols have right now) or make the characters use brooms or something... or even their fingers to imply guns, that'd be fun to do

But I'm just a weird guy with strange ideas. I like craziness.

Good stuff!

PS.: uh, didn't notice the dead guy in the corner. good pose of the main character.

[ July 02, 2002: Message edited by: powerMag82 ]

RaykastCS · Posted: Sat Jul 06, 2002 6:42 pm

bumpy

Ai · Posted: Sat Jul 06, 2002 8:38 pm

that guy in that face mask looks like that Japanese futbol player... just some thoughts.

napalm · Posted: Sat Jul 06, 2002 10:54 pm

consider how people actually stand.. moreso consider how people look while doing an action such as this fellow. perhaps take a few reference shots of yourself with some toy guns.. you'll notice that your painting thus far is a bit stiff and inaccurate. Also, the straight on profile view is a bit boring. try for something a little more dynamic to convey a sense of movement.

Godwin · Posted: Sun Jul 07, 2002 5:22 am

the guy smiles as he kills people?
thats... i dunno

unless he's a hero or main character, give him a mask or soemthing(ike the guy in background, ski-mask), and/or add more guys around him

plus, u may want to move the helicopter further back(further int he background) as it looks too close to the ground and wall, and a little less tilt

the poses,(other than the furthest silhoutte)are good, and so are the colours

[ July 07, 2002: Message edited by: Godwin ]