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J. Tsang
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 3:30 pm     Reply with quote
so here is the painting i m working on now.

in terms of image composition, i know there is something wrong, but i just can't tell.
the image looks so boring i would say. (i dont know any other words to describe it) it's just not an exciting image to look at.
pls help me
thks
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J. Tsang
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 4:00 pm     Reply with quote
i thought the problems is the plain background so i redo it and here is the updated version.

i still need help
thks
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DarkVVulf
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 4:28 pm     Reply with quote
I personally liked the grass background better.

With the new background it's kinda clear that you used the Render Clouds filter for an aid. Mess around with the clouds so it doesn't look as obvious.

Overall though this is a cool concept.
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Bare Bonez
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2002 8:53 am     Reply with quote
Hey dude..

Looks good. I don't see anything wrong with it, 'cept that it's a little freaky [to me].. The soft colours tone it down a bit and make the flowers stand out. Good stuff, sorry no crits here for improvement.
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