Sijun Forums :: View topic - Gunman with hostage WIP

jesusclone · Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2002 7:54 pm

gimme some feedback please

I'm planning to add a lot of details but I'm mostly interested in the pose and anatomy. what do you you all think? Thanks

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[ July 04, 2002: Message edited by: jesusclone ]

sic1 · Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2002 8:11 pm

Hmm... I like it so far, theres one thing that seems to stick out to me, it's the gunman's right leg. It may be just me, but I think it's a little too straight..

Other than that - i like the perspective, and the pose. I don't know if you meant for it to be like this, but I like the touch on the hostage's glasses, how they're a bit tilted - like he's really in distress

Lt. Ivanovic · Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2002 9:23 am

It's pretty good, but I noticed a couple things I didn't like; the hostage's arms seem to be too short and bulky, and there's something awkward about the gunman's right hand, more specifically his fingers. Other than that it's pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Mag82 · Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2002 10:33 am

I like it, but the arms of the hostage are a bit too musculous in my opinion. Kinda downplays the hostage-role a bit, but that's just me. Other than that, the smaller hostage seems to have the exact same proportions as the taller guy, looks a bit awkward, but I'm a newbie, don't listen to me

Good stuff!

Mr.Kh · Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2002 11:08 pm

Regarding those fingers: Grab ahold of the nearest screwdriver and take a peeksy, my pinky is considerably shorter(but no doubt varies form person to person) also the way you have the joints would make pulling the trigger imposible. Not sure if you have a gun kicking aroudn the you can grab onto or not, but give it a try on a toy gun or something. You have the reference with you 24/7 - use it!his hand needs to go back around to the hidden side of the gun more. Kinda hard to explain but maybe you can see it...

GL

jesusclone · Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 8:55 pm

okay, the fingers and the hair are still messed up, but I'm looking for crits on this. What do you think?

Drift Kid Runner · Posted: Fri Jul 05, 2002 6:07 am

on the gun, in the front, it looks like a bareta Ithink? it shouldnt have those grips. It should just be straight. They way you have it is an optical illusion. Look at a picture of a baretta. You should make your gun look good because it is what people are going to look at a lot as well as the guys.

Good picture Ithnk its cool.

Kerrigan